Well done. But yes, too much endfloat. It will hammer its bearings like that and there must presumably be up and down wiggle on the armature?
Really, you want as close to no float as you can get, without ending up with negative. If there are shims between the cb end housing and the body you could try removing or shuffling the pack if there are several - but 25 thou is rather a lot to be taken up there. Probably needs more shimming behind the race of the bearing at the slipring end - but also very worth checking that the bearing outer races are being firmly held in their respective housings with good insulators.
The middle of the slipring ought to be in the middle of the windows for the pick-ups as well - if it's visibly off, might need to think about the shimming at both ends to get it central, though there isn't usually any shim at the non-slipring end. However, if the cb end housing isn't the original one, there can be small differences in fit, which all add up, depending on the bearing insulators in there, etc etc.
Unless you are pretty unlucky, the thread in the ATD yoke for the self extract will probably be OK and you'll just need a new centre bolt/screw. It's a godawful design as no-one with any sense would use the first turn of a left-hand thread you can't get at to prise anything off a taper, but it's what we're stuck with unfortunately and there isn't an easy redesign. I can't for the life of me think why they did it,